Hi CloeyDeb! I noticed that you recently marked an edit as minor that may not have been. "Minor edit" has a very specific definition on Wikipedia—it refers only to superficial edits that could never be the subject of a dispute, such as typo corrections or reverting obvious vandalism. Any edit that changes the meaning of an article is not a minor edit, even if it only concerns a single word. Thank you. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 07:49, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240121074900","author":"Alexeyevitch","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexeyevitch-20240121074900-January_2024","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20240123021100-Alexeyevitch-20240121074900"]}}-->

Thanks for the clarification. D CloeyDeb (talk) 02:11, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240123021100","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240123021100-Alexeyevitch-20240121074900","replies":[]}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

This reads like a resume instead of a biography.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Susanne (Susi) Tegen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 02:01, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240314020100","author":"AngusWOOF","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AngusWOOF-20240314020100-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Susanne_(Susi)_Tegen_(March_14)","replies":[],"displayName":"AngusW\ud83d\udc36\ud83d\udc36F"}}-->

Hello, CloeyDeb! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 02:01, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240314020100","author":"AngusWOOF","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AngusWOOF-20240314020100-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Susanne_(Susi)_Tegen_(March_14)-1","replies":[],"displayName":"AngusW\ud83d\udc36\ud83d\udc36F"}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jamiebuba was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Zivit Inbar and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Jamiebuba (talk) 22:34, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316223400","author":"Jamiebuba","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jamiebuba-20240316223400-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Zivit_Inbar_(March_16)","replies":[]}}-->

The article you submitted to Articles for creation has been created.

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The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Bandit Heeler (talk) 07:34, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317073400","author":"Bandit Heeler","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bandit_Heeler-20240317073400-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Zivit_Inbar","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20240404035500-Bandit_Heeler-20240317073400"]}}-->

Hi there. @Bandit Heeler

Thanks for your support and feedback.

I'm wondering if you could just identify 1 thing you could recommend so I can understand how to move forward to correct the issue.

Much appreciated.

@CloeyDeb CloeyDeb (talk) 03:55, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404035500","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240404035500-Bandit_Heeler-20240317073400","replies":[]}}-->

Hello, CloeyDeb,

Thank you for creating Zivit Inbar.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Hi there, thanks for creating the article. Kindly fix the WP:REFBOMB.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Vanderwaalforces}}. Remember to sign your reply with ~~~~. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

Delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.

Vanderwaalforces (talk) 01:13, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330011300","author":"Vanderwaalforces","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Vanderwaalforces-20240330011300-Ways_to_improve_Zivit_Inbar","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20240423025200-Vanderwaalforces-20240330011300","c-CloeyDeb-20240424014100-Vanderwaalforces-20240330011300"]}}-->

Hi @Gidonb - thanks for the notification. I'm currently looking at editing the article as per recommendations. Any advise that you can provide will be valuable. CloeyDeb (talk) 02:52, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240423025200","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240423025200-Vanderwaalforces-20240330011300","replies":[]}}-->

Hello there @Vanderwaalforces. Please note I have made changes to this article, and addressed the WP: REFBOMB issue I hope. I look forward to any further feedback. D CloeyDeb (talk) 01:41, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240424014100","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240424014100-Vanderwaalforces-20240330011300","replies":[]}}-->

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Zivit Inbar is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Zivit Inbar until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article until the discussion has finished.

gidonb (talk) 23:39, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422233900","author":"Gidonb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Gidonb-20240422233900-Nomination_of_Zivit_Inbar_for_deletion","replies":["c-49.180.6.106-20240423085800-Gidonb-20240422233900","c-CloeyDeb-20240424014200-Gidonb-20240422233900"]}}-->

I am going to made changes to this tomorrow. I'll let you know when they are done. 49.180.6.106 (talk) 08:58, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240423085800","author":"49.180.6.106","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-49.180.6.106-20240423085800-Gidonb-20240422233900","replies":[]}}-->

I have made significant edits to this article including the copy and hopefully I've addressed the WP:REFBOMB issue that was cited as a problem. I look forward to any further feedback and assistance you can offer. D CloeyDeb (talk) 01:42, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240424014200","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240424014200-Gidonb-20240422233900","replies":[]}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by GMH Melbourne was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Lacks reliable sources that are independent of the subject. Also please remove external links within the body of the article. See WP:GNG for the quality of sources that are required to establish notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hacia Atherton and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

GMH Melbourne (talk) 07:34, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240424073400","author":"GMH Melbourne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-GMH_Melbourne-20240424073400-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Hacia_Atherton_(April_24)","replies":[]}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Susi Tegen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 00:22, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240702002200","author":"SafariScribe","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SafariScribe-20240702002200-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Susi_Tegen_(July_2)","replies":[],"displayName":"Safari Scribe"}}-->

Hi there, CloeyDeb, and thank you for creating Kate Renshaw. I see that you have also been working on draft biographies of several other women which have not yet been accepted for mainspace. You might find it useful to try to improve some of these in accordance with the Ten Simple Rules from WikiProject Women in Red. You can join the project by signing up under "New registrations" on Wikipedia:WikiProject Women in Red/New members. Happy editing!--Ipigott (talk) 10:22, 21 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240821102200","author":"Ipigott","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ipigott-20240821102200-Women's_biographies","replies":[]}}-->

Thanks for your contributions to Sonia McDonald. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it needs more sources to establish notability. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. S0091 (talk) 15:36, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240828153600","author":"S0091","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-S0091-20240828153600-Sonia_McDonald_moved_to_draftspace","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20240828225400-S0091-20240828153600","c-CloeyDeb-20240828231500-S0091-20240828153600"]}}-->

thank you. Will work on that. CloeyDeb (talk) 22:54, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240828225400","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240828225400-S0091-20240828153600","replies":[]}}-->

I have added some citations/notability. I would appreciate some feedback. thanks. CloeyDeb (talk) 23:15, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240828231500","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20240828231500-S0091-20240828153600","replies":[]}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sonia McDonald and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Ktkvtsh (talk) 23:55, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240828235500","author":"Ktkvtsh","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ktkvtsh-20240828235500-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Sonia_McDonald_(August_28)","replies":[]}}-->

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Shane Muller, from its old location at User:CloeyDeb/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 03:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210034600","author":"TechnoSquirrel69","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210034600-December_2024","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20241210053600-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210034600"]}}-->

thank you @TechnoSquirrel69 - I assume this means it's not rejected, and I'll get some valuable feedback on the article before it's moved into the live space? CloeyDeb (talk) 05:36, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210053600","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20241210053600-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210034600","replies":["c-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210055200-CloeyDeb-20241210053600"]}}-->

Hey CloeyDeb! Yes, the draft is still in the queue and will be picked up by an AfC reviewer in time. I can tell you at the moment that some of the language needs to be revised with the neutral point of view policy in mind; phrases like "creating meaningful change through technology" and "pioneer" give the impression of bias in favor of the subject. Please also make sure the subject is notable, since that seems to have been an issue with an article of yours in the past. Let me know if you have any questions! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 05:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210055200","author":"TechnoSquirrel69","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210055200-CloeyDeb-20241210053600","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20241210062300-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210055200"]}}-->

Hi @TechnoSquirrel69 - I've made some changes - thoughts? CloeyDeb (talk) 06:23, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210062300","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20241210062300-TechnoSquirrel69-20241210055200","replies":[]}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chaotic Enby was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

A good first step would be to remove all the non-notable awards and the ™ symbols, and focus on what is stated in independent secondary sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Shane Muller and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 07:32, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210073200","author":"Chaotic Enby","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaotic_Enby-20241210073200-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Shane_Muller_(December_10)","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20241210082100-Chaotic_Enby-20241210073200"]}}-->

Thank you for your feedback @Chaotic Enby - I'll be sure to do that in the next 24 hrs and seek your response. CloeyDeb (talk) 08:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210082100","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20241210082100-Chaotic_Enby-20241210073200","replies":[]}}-->

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jamiebuba was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Zivit Inbar and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Jamiebuba (talk) 09:18, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210091800","author":"Jamiebuba","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jamiebuba-20241210091800-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_Zivit_Inbar_(December_10)","replies":["c-CloeyDeb-20241210213900-Jamiebuba-20241210091800"]}}-->

@Jamiebuba - Hi there. I didn't mean to submit this article. I am still working on it in my sandbox. Do you have the ability to delete this Zivit Inbar submission completely? If so I would appreciate it if you could. Thank you. Please advise. CloeyDeb (talk) 21:39, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210213900","author":"CloeyDeb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CloeyDeb-20241210213900-Jamiebuba-20241210091800","replies":[]}}-->

Hello, CloeyDeb. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Hacia Atherton".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 02:03, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220020300","author":"Liz","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Liz-20241220020300-Your_draft_article,_Draft:Hacia_Atherton","replies":[]}}-->