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How did I deviate? Whitemancanjump23 (talk) 06:34, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726063400","author":"Whitemancanjump23","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726063400-1TWO3Writer-20230726063300","replies":["c-1TWO3Writer-20230726064400-Whitemancanjump23-20230726063400"]}}-->

Hi and thank you for the question,

Adding rhetorical questions is not following an encyclopedic style. You can write it like:

He is wondering about his legacy and considers financing the construction of a bridge. 123Writer ^talk 06:44, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726064400","author":"1TWO3Writer","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-1TWO3Writer-20230726064400-Whitemancanjump23-20230726063400","replies":["c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726064800-1TWO3Writer-20230726064400"],"displayName":"123Writer"}}-->

oh ok. why didn't you just change it to this? Whitemancanjump23 (talk) 06:48, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726064800","author":"Whitemancanjump23","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726064800-1TWO3Writer-20230726064400","replies":["c-1TWO3Writer-20230726065400-Whitemancanjump23-20230726064800"]}}-->

Because you were the one editing the article. Didn't want to steal your thunder! Also I use a semi-automated program so it wasn't something I could easily do and I assumed if you needed clarification, you would've asked. 123Writer ^talk 06:54, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726065400","author":"1TWO3Writer","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-1TWO3Writer-20230726065400-Whitemancanjump23-20230726064800","replies":["c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726065700-1TWO3Writer-20230726065400"],"displayName":"123Writer"}}-->

Ok great. Thank you and thanks for helping me out. Have you seen the movie? I loved it! Whitemancanjump23 (talk) 06:57, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726065700","author":"Whitemancanjump23","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726065700-1TWO3Writer-20230726065400","replies":["c-1TWO3Writer-20230726065900-Whitemancanjump23-20230726065700"]}}-->

Unfortunately not, but I'll give it a watch! Don't worry by the way, you aren't in trouble, nor are you expected to memorize the big big big manual of style. Thanks and welcome to Wikipedia! :) 123Writer ^talk 06:59, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726065900","author":"1TWO3Writer","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-1TWO3Writer-20230726065900-Whitemancanjump23-20230726065700","replies":["c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726070100-1TWO3Writer-20230726065900"],"displayName":"123Writer"}}-->

Thank you! If in the future, I have editing questions, would it be ok to ask you? Whitemancanjump23 (talk) 07:01, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726070100","author":"Whitemancanjump23","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726070100-1TWO3Writer-20230726065900","replies":["c-1TWO3Writer-20230726070300-Whitemancanjump23-20230726070100"]}}-->

Sure! And if I'm not available, the fine folks at the Teahouse will gladly assist you. 123Writer ^talk 07:03, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726070300","author":"1TWO3Writer","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-1TWO3Writer-20230726070300-Whitemancanjump23-20230726070100","replies":["c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726071000-1TWO3Writer-20230726070300"],"displayName":"123Writer"}}-->

Thank you! Have a great day :) Whitemancanjump23 (talk) 07:10, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230726071000","author":"Whitemancanjump23","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Whitemancanjump23-20230726071000-1TWO3Writer-20230726070300","replies":[]}}-->

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Ok thanks. I thought this was borderline which is why I went via AFC as opposed to just creating it. Looking at your reasons, I think you're right and that it is on the premature side. Thank you for taking the time here to look at these. Whitemancanjump23 (talk) 11:42, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230913114200","author":"Whitemancanjump23","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Whitemancanjump23-20230913114200-GMH_Melbourne-20230913114000","replies":["c-GMH_Melbourne-20230913114200-Whitemancanjump23-20230913114200"]}}-->

No problem happy to help :) ––– GMH MELBOURNE TALK 11:42, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230913114200","author":"GMH Melbourne","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-GMH_Melbourne-20230913114200-Whitemancanjump23-20230913114200","replies":[]}}-->

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