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Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:48, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230915194800","author":"Gonzo fan2007","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Gonzo_fan2007-20230915194800-GA_Review","replies":[],"displayName":"\u00ab\u00a0Gonzo fan2007"}}-->

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:54, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230913145400","author":"Gonzo fan2007","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Gonzo_fan2007-20230913145400-GA_Review","replies":[]}}-->

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:54, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230913145400","author":"Gonzo fan2007","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Gonzo_fan2007-20230913145400-GA_Review-1","replies":[],"displayName":"\u00ab\u00a0Gonzo fan2007"}}-->

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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I copyedited the article here, let me know if you have any concerns with the edits.
I archived the reference links.
Link Back (American football)
You typically link freshman, but didn't in this article
The quote of "unexpected" probably isn't needed. One word quotes usually don't add a lot, especially with straightforward words like "unexpected".
Ref spot check: #4, 7, 10, 14, 16, 20, 22, 25, 31

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:51, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230915185100","author":"Gonzo fan2007","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Gonzo_fan2007-20230915185100-Comments","replies":["c-BeanieFan11-20230915191700-Gonzo_fan2007-20230915185100"],"displayName":"\u00ab\u00a0Gonzo fan2007"}}-->

@Gonzo fan2007: Addressed these issues. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:17, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230915191700","author":"BeanieFan11","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-BeanieFan11-20230915191700-Gonzo_fan2007-20230915185100","replies":["c-Gonzo_fan2007-20230915194800-BeanieFan11-20230915191700"]}}-->
- Passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:48, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230915194800","author":"Gonzo fan2007","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Gonzo_fan2007-20230915194800-BeanieFan11-20230915191700","replies":[],"displayName":"\u00ab\u00a0Gonzo fan2007"}}-->

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