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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Utopes were:
This currently reads like a "PSA announcement" on avoiding "living off the land" attacks, when it should be written like an encyclopedia article and fully described like so. The sourcing is also insufficient, which independent reliable source states that: "These actions taken together enhance the overall capability of the organization to defend and to recover from LOTL threats."?
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Utopes were:
Still contains WP:NPOV and tone issues, with some brand new questionable sentences. "By combining these approaches, organizations can strengthen their defense against LOTL attacks and reduce the likelihood of undetected system compromises.", which independent, reliable source asserts this?
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Hello Faridgurbanov3, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Living-Off-the-Land (LOTL) Attack to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:
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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:
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The comment the reviewer left was:
This crosses between WP:NOTHOWTO and WP:NOTESSAY. In addition, most of the sources are not reliable (blogs, WP:FORBESCON, commercial sites, conference proceedings, etc.). If resubmitted without substantial improvement with both the content and sourcing, the draft may be rejected meaning it will not longer be considered.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were:
Still a patchwork of close paraphrasing, more and more awkwardly written. Still no sign of independent notability.
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I see your getting the welcome treatment from AfC reviewers! You should be aware that substantial edits and references will be needed to get the article to be accepted - making small edits and immediately resubmitting is not the intended reply. You might consider adding it as a section in Computer Security#Vulnerabilities and attacks instead, which does not require a review. IMO you have created a valuable resource, but Wikipedia has a very particular process in terms of article creation - you will need more notable sources to show WP:GNG, and a paraphrased summary of tools and techniques (rather than just lists). If you would like to write a guide on LOTL prevention, I would recommend Wikiversity. Tule-hog (talk) 16:47, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240917164700","author":"Tule-hog","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tule-hog-20240917164700-LOTL_Attack","replies":[]}}-->
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