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Article Evaluation: Boxer (dog)#Temperament
This article is a B-Class article on the project scale, it was very well written and holds a lot of truth. I myself have a boxer and could agree on the things that were said about their temperament, and build. The editors could have touched more on how this breed is known to have seizures, when my dog started having seizures the vet said how this breed Is very susceptible to getting mild to severe seizures and how they tend to come later in life. Although I do disagree on the nutrition part, not all boxers need a high calorie diet. Most links in the Reference section were not able to open because the URL had been shortened, and the ones that did open like the "Curlie" website did not seem professional/ credible it was sort of like a Wikipedia concept website where their is different editors/creators but much less detailed. The links need improvement but the article seemed to have no bias since it named the benefits of having this breed such as good with children and are also loyal to their owners as well a going into detail on how their health tends to be poor in turn they are breeds that are going to cost the owner some time and money with the constant check ups at the Vet's.
The talk page on the article seemed to be harsh to me the people were rude although one of the points made was how the author of the article said that the boxer breed was fearless, and it is not true, boxers tend to be full of anxiety so I do agree on that comment made.
Greece Improvements/ Book Sources
I noticed that the references tab at the bottom of the Greece page were up to date. There is a citation that needs to be added under the climate part of the article were an author claims that one of the bigger islands of Greece climate is temperate. The article doesn't have a ton of information, I noticed it mainly consists of two big chunks, physical geography and climate. I plan on expanding the article by adding things like its history, military/ law enforcement information, education, and most importantly its culture. Some source ideas I found on expanding the culture part would be maybe this book[1] on Greece Music, Text, and overall culture located at UTA library. When it comes to History I can take a developmental/ military angle by adding information about the struggle of ancient Greece in places like Athens with another book[2] found at the UTA library.
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- ^ Phillips, Tom; D'Angour, Armand, eds. (2018). Music, text, and culture in ancient Greece (First edition ed.). Oxford, United Kingdom: Oxford University Press. ISBN 9780198794462.
{{cite book}}:|edition=has extra text (help) - ^ Roberts, Jennifer Tolbert (2017). The plague of war: Athens, Sparta, and the struggle for ancient Greece. Ancient warfare and civilization. Ebooks Corporation. New York, NY: Oxford University Press. ISBN 9780199996650.
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