Reviewer:FormalDude (talk·contribs) 07:49, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2022-01-09T07:49:00.000Z","author":"FormalDude","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-FormalDude-2022-01-09T07:49:00.000Z-GA_Review","replies":[]}}-->
I will post updates here as I complete the review. Please allow up to seven days for the review to be completed. ––FormalDudetalk07:49, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2022-01-09T07:49:00.000Z","author":"FormalDude","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-FormalDude-2022-01-09T07:49:00.000Z-GA_Review-1","replies":[]}}-->
Article is quite similar to First circle of Hell and Third circle of hell, which were also written by you. Let's cover some more detail; good class articles are supposed to be complete enough to satisfy a serious student or researcher. Some additional background and context could be added for the characters (for example Minos and Homer).
Change murdered lovers whose story was contemporary with, and well-known in, Dante's time. to murdered lovers whose story was contemporary with (and well-known) in Dante's time.
Thanks for taking a look at this. I've amended the links as you mention and reworded the sentence in the lead--as it's just a summary of the body I opted to trim it rather than introduce bracketed asides for the sake of clarity, let know me if that's alright. Changes can be seen here. As to expanding the background--I will take another look for some more material discussing the depiction of Minos but what level of detail do you feel should be devoted to Homer? My inclination would be just to provide a brief gloss as to who he was and what he wrote without going into any real detail, as he's usually considered less influential on the Commedia than Virgil's Aeneids are, but if you feel like more is warranted I can go further. ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ15:28, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2022-01-14T15:28:00.000Z","author":"Grapple X","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T15:28:00.000Z-Comments","replies":["c-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T16:15:00.000Z-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T15:28:00.000Z"],"displayName":"\u1d79\u0280\u1d00\u1d18\u1d18\u029f\u1d07"}}-->
Some further discussion on the depiction of Minos added here. ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ16:15, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2022-01-14T16:15:00.000Z","author":"Grapple X","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T16:15:00.000Z-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T15:28:00.000Z","replies":["c-FormalDude-2022-01-14T16:48:00.000Z-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T16:15:00.000Z"],"displayName":"\u1d79\u0280\u1d00\u1d18\u1d18\u029f\u1d07"}}-->
That's great, thanks! This is a very well done article and I'm happy to list it as GA. ––FormalDudetalk16:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2022-01-14T16:48:00.000Z","author":"FormalDude","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-FormalDude-2022-01-14T16:48:00.000Z-Grapple_X-2022-01-14T16:15:00.000Z","replies":["c-Grapple_X-2022-01-15T00:50:00.000Z-FormalDude-2022-01-14T16:48:00.000Z"]}}-->
Thank you for your review. If there's anything further you'd like to see addressed, let me know. ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇꭗ00:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2022-01-15T00:50:00.000Z","author":"Grapple X","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Grapple_X-2022-01-15T00:50:00.000Z-FormalDude-2022-01-14T16:48:00.000Z","replies":[],"displayName":"\u1d79\u0280\u1d00\u1d18\u1d18\u029f\u1d07"}}-->