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Did you know... that Franz Ferdinand's fourth album Right Thoughts, Right Words, Right Action was recorded in studios in Glasgow, London, and Stockholm?

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@Aria1561:, although many religious and philosophical traditions lay claim to the notion of "right thoughts, right words, and right action", I believe this title is an allusion to the Noble Eightfold Path of Buddhism. I'm surprised there isn't more discussion of this in the sources about the album. Viriditas (talk) 05:48, 1 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-07-01T05:48:00.000Z","author":"Viriditas","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Viriditas-2015-07-01T05:48:00.000Z-Title","replies":[]}}-->

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z","author":"Tomandjerry211 (alt)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z-GA_Review","replies":["c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z","c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z"]}}-->

Comments below:

Citations in the lead and the infobox are unnecessary.

Not done - I left in the citations for the genres. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z","replies":["c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-1","c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-2","c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-3","c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-4","c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:14:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z"]}}-->

It is unnecessary to put citations like this: The sun is hot.^[1] The sun is not on fire.^[1]

Done - Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

Too many short paragraphs in the "Singles" section.

Done - Fixed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-1","replies":[]}}-->

Twitter is largely considered unreliable.

Done - Twitter sources removed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-2","replies":["c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-10T14:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T14:28:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z"]}}-->

On that point, the notes require a citation.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T14:01:00.000Z","author":"Tomandjerry211 (alt)","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-10T14:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

Done - Citations have been added for the notes. Aria1561 (talk) 14:28, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T14:28:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T14:28:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

Expand the contraction "can't".

Further explanation needed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-3","replies":[]}}-->

It would be nice if you added an image of the cover of the album under fair use.

I believe the cover already has a fair use rationale within the image's "Summary" section. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z-4","replies":[]}}-->

Two dead links to the "Gaon" and the "Spotify" websites

Done Gaon chart dead links fixed. The Spotify ref doesn't contain a dead link. It just requires you to sign in to the Spotify service. It should bring you to the album's streaming page once done. Aria1561 (talk) 13:14, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T13:14:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:14:00.000Z-Aria1561-2015-08-10T13:01:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

All for now.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z","author":"Tomandjerry211 (alt)","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z","replies":["c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-10T14:51:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z"]}}-->
- Passing, well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:51, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T14:51:00.000Z","author":"Tomandjerry211 (alt)","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-10T14:51:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-09T21:34:00.000Z","replies":["c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T15:37:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-10T14:51:00.000Z"]}}-->

Thank you very much for reviewing this. :) Aria1561 (talk) 15:37, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-08-10T15:37:00.000Z","author":"Aria1561","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Aria1561-2015-08-10T15:37:00.000Z-Tomandjerry211_(alt)-2015-08-10T14:51:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

^ ^a ^b Smith The Sun, p. 5

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