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It was premiered on 24 February 2014 → The recording premiered on 24 February 2014
United States modern rock radio stations → American modern rock radio stations
the album's official second single → remove "official"
where it reached the number 19. → remove overfluous "the"
the same day the publication of → the same day the availability of
Infobox
Unlink Tove Lo here
Background and release
with the latter two credited → with the latter two being credited
the singer said; "He's a Swedish → the singer confessed, "He's a Swedish
at Warner/Chappell Studios in Stockholm.[4] The Struts produced and programmed the track and played the → at Warner/Chappell Studios in Stockholm, with The Struts producing and programming it alongside playing the
"Habits (Stay High)".[8][9][3][10] → refs in numerical order
to United States modern rock radio stations → to American modern rock radio stations
a release to US contemporary → a release to American contemporary
However, Republic announced → However, the label announced
would impact US CHR → would impact the aforementioned radio format
official second single → remove "official"
from US modern → from American modern
Inspiration and composition
opening track in Tove Lo's → "in" to "on"
since most of her songs → state "her tracks" here for alternation
artist said; "'Not → ; to ,
included in "The Love" section on Lo's debut → "on" to "of"
and electropop song, with elements → no comma here
"exploding" chorus: "Baby, listen → : to ,
in the verse "I'm up → comma after "verse"
The line "I'm queen → comma after "line"
Reception
Lewis Corner of Digital Spy included the track → state "the recording" here for alternation
and wrote that; "An exploding → ; to ,
Chad Hillard of Hillydilly wrote; "Boasting → ; to ,
two on his top 5 → two on his top five
Queen of the Clouds that; "Out of all the songs → ; to ,
Music video
artist said; "I choked → ; to ,
review, writing; "[...] It's → ; to ,
Live performances
she performed the song on US music → she performed the song on American
in London, UK → no need to mention "UK" here as it's a common term
Image from "Inspiration and composition" should be remove as it is overfluous and brings nothing to the article. Additionally, the singer is already presented on the single's cover artwork.
@Paparazzzi: On hold for 7 days! Interesting reading, but needs a little bit of additional work before it can be passed. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:24, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2016-12-31T20:24:00.000Z","author":"Cartoon network freak","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Cartoon_network_freak-2016-12-31T20:24:00.000Z-Outcome","replies":[]}}-->
All comments addressed!. Thank you so much for the review! Regards, --Paparazzzi (talk) 00:50, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2017-01-01T00:50:00.000Z","author":"Paparazzzi","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Paparazzzi-2017-01-01T00:50:00.000Z-Outcome","replies":["c-Cartoon_network_freak-2017-01-01T12:28:00.000Z-Paparazzzi-2017-01-01T00:50:00.000Z"]}}-->
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