Asad29591, I suggest you read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. Your attempts at rewriting was certainly WP:BOLD, and I like that, but it lacks redeeming qualities. The lead should reflect the main points of the article, according to the weight of those points. See MOS:OPEN for the opening paragraph: "The first paragraph should define or identify the topic with a neutral point of view, but without being too specific. It should establish the context in which the topic is being considered by supplying the set of circumstances or facts that surround it... It should also establish the boundaries of the topic;
The opening paragraph should establish notability. By far Remey's greatest notability comes from his failed attempt to claim leadership in 1960, not that his daddy was in the civil war or that he was an architect. Nor is his notability primarily from being a Hand of the Cause or on the International Baha'i Council. The reason Serv181920, and many others love this subject is that Remey started a schism and that created the controversy that drew people like Johnson to write a book about it. That has to be in the opening paragraph.
I'm going to restore the well-written lead. Having a source doesn't mean your version is appropriate or better, mine actually had better sourcing. If you want to change the lead you need to establish weight in secondary sources, a process that you have repeatedly failed to grasp across many pages. Cuñado ☼ - Talk 06:59, 2 April 2021 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2021-04-02T06:59:00.000Z","author":"Cu\u00f1ado","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cu\u00f1ado-2021-04-02T06:59:00.000Z-Lead","replies":["c-Serv181920-2021-04-04T10:29:00.000Z-Cu\u00f1ado-2021-04-02T06:59:00.000Z"]}}-->
Sure. Will Read. Thank you.Asad29591 (talk) 14:32, 5 April 2021 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2021-04-05T14:32:00.000Z","author":"Asad29591","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Asad29591-2021-04-05T14:32:00.000Z-Lead","replies":["c-Cu\u00f1ado-2021-04-06T23:59:00.000Z-Asad29591-2021-04-05T14:32:00.000Z"]}}-->
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