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Nominator: B33net (talk · contribs) 00:38, 2 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Viriditas (talk · contribs) 22:28, 1 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

I think you are a bit too gung ho on human exploration. I think in recent years, people have become far more skeptical of such an enterprise and the section should probably be toned down a bit or brought up to date. I am fully aware that many Wikipedia articles about space exploration share this overly optimistic POV, but things do need to change. More recent studies cast serious doubt on the feasibility of human exploration in the near future, and Wikipedia is slightly behind when it comes to promoting this newer, skeptical POV, preferring instead to engage in science fiction-like dreams and plans for the future, ideas that are not really shared by those engaged in newer research on the subject. Basically, the medical evidence suggests that the human body and mind are just not cut out for it, as much as we like to dream about leaving the planet and moving on to greener pastures.

@Viriditas: Okay, I’ve attempted to reword the paragraphs based on your suggestions. Please review them, and if they don’t meet your expectations, let me know what else you’d like me to do with them. In the meantime, I’ll focus on removing the repetition of the links. 🐝 B33net 🐝 23:20, 1 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Viriditas: I’ve added the suggestions you’ve provided. Please review them, and if they don’t meet your expectations, let me know what else you’d like me to do with them. 🐝 B33net 🐝 03:14, 2 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Viriditas: I am stopping work on this Good Article nomination now to focus on other personal tasks and Wikipedia projects. This review proved to be a bit too challenging for me, so I have decided to close it. Thank you for helping me improve the article, but I feel this is currently beyond my skill level. Thanks once again.

@B33net: Check your sources and you are good to go. Not seeing the so-called "challenge". I think you misread something. Viriditas (talk) 17:31, 4 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Viriditas: Ok. I set up a space for us over at User:B33net/Sandbox2 and added the notes you left on the citations you reviewed. Could you do me a quick favor and give me a simple summary of what you need me to work on next? I'm a little confused about the next steps and want to make sure I get everything exactly right for you.

@B33net: Excellent work! Now, open up several windows (tabs, views, split screens, whichever works best for you) and manually go through the sources we haven't discussed or checked, which is the 48 missing rows). Don't try to do it all at once. Do it in sets, 10 here, 10 there. Pace yourself. You've got as much time as you need and there's no hurry. Make sure the source and the text are in parity. If they are not, make a note so you can go back and fix it by adding a new source or making changes. It's that simple. Like I said, take your time and just do a handful here and there over a few days so you can do other stuff as well.

Also, don't forget to update the old rows to note the corrections. You can cross out the old comments or leave them, or just delete them, as we already have a record of them on this page.

And don't forget that those 48 refs refers to an older version of the page. If you want to change it to the newer version, that's fine, but keep in mind it is going to change every time you update a new ref, so it might be easier to work off the old system (see diff below in the spot-check section). But you could use the newest version if you want, but you would need to keep close track which is confusing. Do it any way you want, I just thought having a static diff version was easiest.

• Remove all duplicate links in the lead section. Link once in first use, then remove the subsequent dupes after first usage. As for subsequent linkage in other sections, don't worry about that for now. Just work this way for each section (first use linked, followed by removal of all subsequent links). You probably should avoid linking to the same links in sections that have close proximity after first linkage. Similarly, you may want to consider linking summary style (main hatnote links) only, and leaving out subsequent links in the same section, although this practice differs widely, so use your best judgment.

• It began with the National Aeronautics and Space Administration's (NASA)... NASA is listed as an exception when writing out an acronym on first usage. See: MOS:IE.
• As of 2026, Titan has been studied through spacecraft flybys... I would avoid time sensitive language like this in the lead. There are many ways to say this without using "As of 2026". Have a look at other similar articles.
• Pioneer 11 was the first spacecraft to explore Titan in 1979, followed by Voyager 1 in 1980 and Voyager 2 in 1981. You pretty much already said this in the first paragraph, so you are repeating it again. Easiest for now is to just say "The original missions determined that Titan has..." but there are many ways to write this.
• Voyager 1's close encounter... Best to avoid this kind of possessive in English. You have many options to choose from: "The Voyager 1..." flyby, encounter, observations, etc. Since you are already using encounter, just change it to "The Voyager 1 encounter" or "The close encounter of Voyager 1", you get the idea.
• The mission is designed to extend the discoveries of Cassini–Huygens by conducting measurements at multiple locations across Titan's surface. Is this paragraph already sourced in the body? You still have citations in the lead. Are they needed there?
• You may want to consider rewriting the lead so that it's not just a straight chronology, putting the highlights and milestones in the first paragraph, followed by a description of the exploration history. Just something to think about for now, so put it on the back burner for the moment. I'll try and find a high-quality article that already does this as an example, if I can. My opinion is that you want to hold and keep the reader's attention by front-loading their interest with the most unique aspects of the topic rather than burying them, which is what the current version does. In other words, immediately present the details most likely to engage readers at the beginning.

This section is for the planned rewrite; it doesn't need to be addressed until after the source verification and modification is complete

The current version of the lead reads like a history section sorted by chronology. At first glance, that may seem natural, given the structure of the article, but this is not helpful to the general reader, as readers quickly lose interest and fall asleep. We want to front load the lead, letting the reader know why Titan is interesting and why they should care about it. This has a dramatic effect on reader interest.

The current version of the lead also gives equal weight to the missions, even though Cassini–Huygens is most significant to our understanding, so we need to keep in mind the nature of narrative significance. That's the roadmap for the rewrite, bounded by a single question: How did scientists explore Titan despite its great distance and atmospheric impenetrability?

To answer this question, begin the lead by telling us what we now know, up front (it is the largest moon of Saturn, it has a nitrogen atmosphere, rivers and seas, weather, organic chemistry, subsurface ocean). You can add to that of course. That's your first paragraph. You have now made the reader sit up on the edge of their seat.

Now establish the significance of the missions beginning with the subsequent paragraphs. This shifts the narrative from one of x happened on y date, to chronology in service of the narrative. The lead begins with the important discoveries followed by an explanation as to how those discoveries were achieved. Pioneer and Voyager discovered the atmosphere and showed the surface couldn't be seen, Cassini showed the hidden surface, Huygens landed, and Dragonfly will investigate the chemistry in the future, etc.

@Viriditas: I’ve addressed these issues and rewritten the lead to align with the specified requirements. Please review it and let me know your thoughts. 🐝 B33net 🐝 01:03, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

I just need help with the linking 🐝 B33net 🐝 01:06, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Okay, good work. Looks like we are almost done. Can you look closely at this review page to see if you missed anything? That's about all I need you to do at this point unless you can think of anything else. I'm going to begin my final review now. It might take a while. This is because I'm going offline for a bit and won't return until later tonight. Viriditas (talk) 01:16, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Okay, I’ve reviewed this page, and I don’t think I’ve missed anything. 🐝 B33net 🐝 01:19, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Viriditas: I’ve replaced the first image in the Technical requirements section with the planned trajectory of Dragonfly. I’m just checking if you’re okay with this change or if I should revert it to the old image of Cassini’s trajectory. 🐝 B33net 🐝 19:06, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@B33net: I've brought the lead down from 437 to 253 words, which is pretty much the bare minimum for the lead. If you think key material should be added back, please do so. Viriditas (talk) 23:16, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! Looks complete to me. 🐝 B33net 🐝 02:42, 9 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

• ...while newer spacecraft concepts, including NASA's Dragonfly mission, use advanced heat shield materials such as Phenolic-Impregnated Carbon Ablator (PICA). It looks like this is used quite a bit like this on Wikipedia and elsewhere, particularly on technical documents. However, I think the use of the definite article and lowercase favored by other authors is superior: "the phenolic-impregnated carbon ablator (PICA)". Someone once told me that the lack of the definite article and use of uppercase derives from military writing conventions. At the very least, I think it should say "the". You may wish to get additional input on this.
• @B33net: You should consider reverting this edit.[1] My comment in the spot-check wasn't intended to replace the "Aerothermodynamics for Dragonfly's Titan Entry" (2026) with "Nonequilibrium Radiation Intensity Measurements in Simulated Titan Atmospheres" (2010), and if I'm reading it correctly, I don't think it can. The point was that the 2026 presentation drew on the 2010 paper, not that it was equivalent or contained the same data. So you should stick with the 2026 presentation as your main source there.

Pioneer 11 (1979)

• No issues.

Voyager program (1980 and 1981)

• Voyager 1 followed a trajectory designed for a close flyby of Titan.. You link to flyby here first (outside of the lead), but I would link first in the Pioneer section preceding it.
• Voyager 1's close encounter... See comment in the lead section up above about using the possessive in this way. I would write "The close encounter of Voyager 1" to avoid it, or use a different style.
• @Viriditas: For your comment on citation 17: The date is listed on the article itself. It appears on the left side of the page, where the publication date is displayed.[2]
  • @B33net: Apologies for the confusion. "Date" as I am using it here, does not refer to the citation but to the date in this sentence: "Titan at a much greater distance of approximately 665,000 km (413,000 mi) on 23 August 1981." See for example the date here and how it differs (and it's not clear which is correct, so you will need to look). Further the date "23 August 1981" is not explicitly mentioned in the source, although it does point to different ways that may be needed to determine it. In any case, the exact date isn't clear, so find a source that makes it known.
    • @B33net: Thanks for adding the source, but did you confirm it was correct? The reason I ask is because that source appears to have been published (at least that specific page) before the date, meaning we don't know if it actually occurred at that time. Best to find a source published after that time that verifies it.
      • @Viriditas: I cannot find any reliable sources explicitly listing the flyby date, so I would greatly appreciate your help or alternative phrasing suggestions
        • Add it to the list. It doesn't need immediate resolution, but we will need to decide what to do in the next few days. For now, you could just say late August, as the sources appear to agree on that point.

Cassini (2004*–2017)

• During its descent and after touchdown... You'll need to check this, but Huygens transmitted data for a total of 219.4 minutes during its descent and landing. I was wondering about that while reading this paragraph, so consider merging it into the text in some way or another.
• ...several months before the spacecraft concluded its mission by entering Saturn's atmosphere in September 2017 to avoid the biological contamination of potentially habitable worlds. Write it however you want, but simply saying it ended its mission by diving into the atmosphere without saying why is a bit abrupt. You can also link to forward contamination if you want.

Huygens (2005)

• No issues.

Dragonfly (2028)

• No issues.

• Came for images of AVIATR and Titan Submarine, left disappointed. I guess we can't everything we want, and the one single image works well as it is. I may return to this section on a second pass, as I noticed some minor prose issues.

• I've got some petty complaints, but I'm keeping quiet for now. Might return for a second pass later.

• This section should be named "References" not "Reference". See WP:CS.

Spot-check

Note: since the ref numbers have changed due to newer edits, this spot-check is based on this older version

• Randomized: 4 (check; this is a technical presentation [gray literature] based in part on the results found in a 2010 peer-reviewed paper[3]), 7 (check; get in the habit of citing the actual page, in this case p. 2.18), 9 (check; I have started citing paragraph numbers when I'm able, but this is not necessary here, just something to consider for the future), 13 (check; I flipped the switch to url-status=dead so that the archive link is first, as it is no longer live), 17 (revisit; date is not found at link and differs [see this example you will need to confirm] consider using work=NASA History |publisher=NASA in the citation), 20 (revisit; Cassini–Huygens was a joint mission by NASA, ESA, and ASI), 22 (check; added HAL ID and open access icon as it is not yet within the cite journal template), 26 (revisit; not found in source, is this the correct cite?), 29 (revisit; I appreciate you adding the new material, but it is no longer supported by the same cite. You will probably need to add a new cite after the old material), 34 (revisit; I think you are citing an additional source, but failed to list it. I was able to confirm half of the material in the cited paper. Good job citing semantic scholar.), 38a (unknown; it's not yet clear what you are citing here. This is why I tend not to use dual sources for citation, but if you do, in the future consider using para. indicators; will return to this), 38b (check; but why use two cites here? sometimes I will use one to support the full statment, and another as a footnote for specific info), 42 (revisit; I think you may have accidentally linked to the wrong cite here, or maybe it isn't needed at all), 45a (unknown; again, it is unclear why you are using two sources here when 44 already supports it? ), 45b (check), 48 (unknown; you've got three different sources here, it's not clear what you are citing, and you aren't using specific page numbers), 51 (can't get it to load; internet access has been odd lately, will try later), 54 (url won't load ), 58 (check, but again, unclear why two sources are cited), 62 (can't access at the moment, will try tomorrow), 65 (revisit; not seeing it), 67 (check).
• Summary: Around 20 sources were chosen randomly from a set of approximately 68 (give or take since many are used for multiple cites). Of those, roughly 35% indicated a problem of some kind. There could be around 40 sources with issues, we don't know. Given what we know at the moment, I recommend that the nominator check the remaining 48 sources on their own on a subpage in their user space (or use this space). There are even tools available to do this, but I find it easier to just split screens, tabs, or views, and work in multiple window areas, with the source open in one view, the article in another, and in the third, a page where you can record your verification efforts. Many users use wikitables to do this, but it doesn't really matter how you do it, just as long as it is done. One user got really creative with it and created a subpage just for verification. That's actually a great way to do it.

@Viriditas: Alright. I’ve finished checking the sources. I’ll work on what I’ve complained about tonight. Check it out, User:B33net/Sandbox2.

@B33net: Good job. After you are finished making those changes, I'll take a look. Once that's done, aside from a few things here and there that I will look at, the only thing left is to refresh the lead section. After that, we will be done and I can hopefully pass this article. Don't get too worried about any of these steps. When you take it one at a time, there's a lot less stress. I will also be able to provide some guidance on the lead that will make this easy. Viriditas (talk) 22:42, 6 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@B33net: It looks like you are close to complete with your spot-check. I just want to remind you to make sure the separate spot-check up above is complete. I think you've addressed most of it, but just take another look here to make sure you have. That would mean 17, 20, 26, 29, 34, 38a, 42, 48, 51, 54, 58, 62, and 65, using the old numbering from the previous revision. Thanks. Viriditas (talk) 01:58, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Okay, I’ve just finished my spot check and I’ll review your spot check above. 🐝 B33net 🐝 02:08, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Viriditas: I’ve addressed all but one of your complaints. The only remaining issue is citation 65, which I’ve replaced with Robert Zubrin’s book, Islands in the Sky: Bold New Ideas for Colonizing Space. I need your help in narrowing down the page numbers for citations 61 and 62, based on the most recent update as of now. Once we have the citations sorted, we’ll have resolved both of our complaints. 🐝 B33net 🐝 16:53, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

On it now. Give me a few. Viriditas (talk) 22:56, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

If we are talking about the same thing, I'm not sure how or why Islands in the Sky is being used. It doesn't seem to support the cited material (except for p. 93, where it says "To those born on Titan or Miranda, the moons of Saturn or Uranus will be home, and few will have any greater desire to move to Earth than most terrestrials today have to live on Venus...those raised in low-gravity environments, such as the moons of the outer planets, will be ill-adapted to live on Earth"). I would just remove it entirely and cite "Titan's surface gravity is about 14 percent of Earth's gravity, which could create long-term health concerns related to reduced gravity exposure, including bone and muscle loss" elsewhere or delete it. I think you can easily cite "Titan's surface gravity is about 14 percent of Earth's gravity", and if you want, allude to p. 93 and cite another source, perhaps Wohlforth and Hendrix 2017. I think I can try fixing this now. Viriditas (talk) 23:37, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Note, once I fix this, are there any other issues with the sourcing? Viriditas (talk) 23:38, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

No, we have checked all of my and your sources. 🐝 B33net 🐝 23:59, 7 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Great. I will do that in the background right now. Can you take a look at the current lead, read my comments up above, and see if anything in the lead can be tightened up a bit? Viriditas (talk) 00:00, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

@B33net: Take a look at my changes and see what you think. Viriditas (talk) 01:25, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

It looks amazing! Thanks! 🐝 B33net 🐝 01:35, 8 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear, concise and understandable to an appropriately broad audience, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   Copyedits in progress.

   Lead could benefit from a partial to full rewrite.

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

   Duplicate linking is excessive (you have already noted concerns in your pre-review notes)

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   Spot-check complete. Issues listed in section above.

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

   Earwig shows no indication of copyvio.

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   Main aspects addressed.

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

   Focused!

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

   Neutral

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

   Stable.

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   All images are tagged and used appropriately.

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

   Captions are good.

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Putting this on hold so nominator can work on source verification.