Talk:Brent McIntosh

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Hi, I work with Brent McIntosh at Citi. We noticed the information about his job title at Citi is outdated. His current title is Chief Legal Officer & Corporate Secretary. This is reflected in his biography on our corporate website and also in this Bloomberg profile.

In addition, the mention of his previous membership with the Council on Foreign Relations is inaccurate. He is a current member of the Council on Foreign Relations. I’m including here the membership roster of the Council as well as another source that references his current membership. A logical edit here would be to move the Council reference to serve as the first sentence of that paragraph: “McIntosh is a member of the Council on Foreign Relations, …”. Can someone please review these suggestions? Thank you! LowneyJen (talk) 16:24, 16 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240216162400","author":"LowneyJen","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LowneyJen-20240216162400-Correction","replies":["c-LowneyJen-20240222201400-LowneyJen-20240216162400","c-Reconrabbit-20240314123700-LowneyJen-20240216162400","c-Encoded-20240503213600-LowneyJen-20240216162400"]}}-->

@Timrollpickering @1990'sguy Would one of you be willing to review these suggestions, please? Thank you for your consideration. LowneyJen (talk) 20:14, 22 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240222201400","author":"LowneyJen","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-LowneyJen-20240222201400-LowneyJen-20240216162400","replies":[]}}-->
@LowneyJen You're more likely to draw attention to this request by adding {{Edit COI}} to the top of this section. I've done it for you in this case. Depending on who responds the form of your request might need to be altered. Reconrabbit 12:37, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240314123700","author":"Reconrabbit","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Reconrabbit-20240314123700-LowneyJen-20240216162400","replies":[],"displayName":"Recon"}}-->
 Partly done: I've updated the job title, but was unable to find the section regarding the council on foreign relations - it appears to be up-to-date as requested so I'm assuming it's already been done by another editor. Please let me know if I've missed it though! Thanks, Encoded  Talk 💬 21:36, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503213600","author":"Encoded","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Encoded-20240503213600-LowneyJen-20240216162400","replies":["c-LowneyJen-20240509152100-Encoded-20240503213600"]}}-->
@Encoded Thank you for your help. I should point out that Brent is no longer a senior fellow at the Council on Foreign Relations, but a regular member. If you remove the current sentence, you could simply note him as a member of the CoFR within the first sentence of the “Civil Society” section instead.
Also for your consideration, Brent served at the U.S. Department of Treasury in another role prior to his Under Secretary role in 2019. In March 2017, Brent was nominated to be the General Counsel of the U.S. Department of the Treasury. He was confirmed by the Senate in August 2017 and served in that role until September 2019. You could also use this as the source for the article’s second sentence where it’s noted that a citation is needed. LowneyJen (talk) 15:21, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509152100","author":"LowneyJen","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-LowneyJen-20240509152100-Encoded-20240503213600","replies":[]}}-->