Talk:Book of Wei

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more context

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This article could use a greater context in order to highlight the significance of the "Book of Wei" and with that greater context will hopefully come additional sources which will make this article much stronger and well rounded.

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Added Historical Context

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I have added a paragraph with some basic information on both the Northern and Eastern Wei Dynasties of which the Book of Wei is supposed to be about. Cehceh27 (talk) 18:03, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Cehceh27[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2017-11-27T18:03:00.000Z","author":"Cehceh27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cehceh27-2017-11-27T18:03:00.000Z-Added_Historical_Context","replies":[]}}-->

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To add to article

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To add to this article: during which dynasty did Wei Shou live (and compile Wei Shu? 173.88.246.138 (talk) 08:52, 20 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2020-04-20T08:52:00.000Z","author":"173.88.246.138","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-173.88.246.138-2020-04-20T08:52:00.000Z-To_add_to_article","replies":[]}}-->

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Neutral point of view

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Some of the phrasing seems to be not quite following the neutral point of view, such as "The greatest accomplishment of the Northern Wei dynasty." Perhaps we could rephrase it to something along the lines of "the common perception among Chinese people..." or "the standard Chinese historiography views X as the greatest accomplishment of the Northern Wei dynasty." NeoChrono Ryu (talk) 04:54, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230202045400","author":"NeoChrono Ryu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-NeoChrono_Ryu-20230202045400-Neutral_point_of_view","replies":[]}}-->