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Review: November 8, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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for the Commodore 64 in April 1987 - add "released" before "in April 1987
The game was released for 8-bit consoles as well as more advanced 16-bit consoles - do not really think "more advanced" is necessary.
More gameplay information need to be mentioned in the lead
You should split the first paragraph and The game has two endings depending on the side chosen. If playing as NATO, the main objective is to stall Soviet forces long enough until American reinforcements arrive, or if playing as the Warsaw Pact, the objective is to destroy all NATO forces and then create a "setting" section.
a variety of different types of unit - Rephrase it to "a variety of units"
however armoured units will be able to withstand more damage than regular units - "will be able" should be changed to "are able"
There are two maps in the game - Rephrase it to "The game displays two maps on screen".
(despite not having any differentiation on the map) - bracket shouldn't be used. I do not really see the importance of mentioning this actually.
"best looking" wargames he had ever seen - Should be "he had even seen at that time"

Great work on the article, and when all the issues are fixed, the article is good to go. AdrianGamer (talk) 06:03, 7 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-11-07T06:03:00.000Z","author":"AdrianGamer","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AdrianGamer-2015-11-07T06:03:00.000Z-GA_Review","replies":["c-Jaguar-2015-11-07T21:30:00.000Z-AdrianGamer-2015-11-07T06:03:00.000Z"]}}-->

@AdrianGamer: thanks for the review! I've attempted top address everything. I removed the "despite not having any differentiation on the map" sentence as it was a little redundant. I've also split some of the gameplay into a new settings section as suggested, I hope I done this right? Please let me know if you have any more concerns or if I messed anything up. Thanks again for the review. JAGUAR 21:30, 7 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-11-07T21:30:00.000Z","author":"Jaguar","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Jaguar-2015-11-07T21:30:00.000Z-AdrianGamer-2015-11-07T06:03:00.000Z","replies":["c-AdrianGamer-2015-11-08T02:59:00.000Z-Jaguar-2015-11-07T21:30:00.000Z"],"displayName":"JAG"}}-->

Thank you very much for addressing all the issues so quickly. Battlefield Germany is now a good article. Congratulations! AdrianGamer (talk) 02:59, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2015-11-08T02:59:00.000Z","author":"AdrianGamer","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-AdrianGamer-2015-11-08T02:59:00.000Z-Jaguar-2015-11-07T21:30:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

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