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The article East Finchley tube station you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:East Finchley tube station for things which need to be addressed. sst✈ 05:45, 14 January 2016 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2016-01-14T05:45:00.000Z","author":"SSTflyer","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SSTflyer-2016-01-14T05:45:00.000Z-Your_GA_nomination_of_East_Finchley_tube_station","replies":[],"displayName":"\u2708"}}-->

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On 22 January 2016, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Elephant & Castle tube station, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that the first baby born on the London Underground was delivered at the Elephant & Castle tube station (pictured) in 1924? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Elephant & Castle tube station. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, daily totals), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

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• Rebelighthart (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Crescent Communities (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi Vincent60030--Thanks for taking the time to review the Crescent Communities draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Crescent_Communities. I took a second look at the notability guidelines for orgs and companies (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(organizations_and_companies), and I think Crescent Communities meets them. I should have done a better job drawing out some of what's in the references I included - here's how I see it:

1. SIGNIFICANT COVERAGE: Crescent Communities has received significant coverage from reliable, independent sources (nationally recognized by Inc. Magazine as one of the top fastest growing private companies in America in 2015, recognized by Business North Carolina as one of North Carolina’s top private companies, in 2015, etc.).

2. RELIABLE EVIDENCE: There is verifiable, objective evidence that Crescent Communities has received significant attention from independent sources (14 independent sources are listed in the article including the Wall Street Journal, Charlotte Business Journal and Inc. Magazine).

As requested, I improved the references and added in some additional sources. Would you mind taking a second look at the article? I appreciate your time and look forward to hearing your thoughts.

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Hi Vincent60030,

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Although New Page Reviewing can occasionally be somewhat more challenging than AfC, the criteria for obtaining the right are roughly the same. The Page Curation tool is even easier to use than the Helper Script, so it's likely that most AfC reviewers already have more than enough knowledge for the task of New Page Review.

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• Warbler21 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Gary Doust (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi Vincent-

I don't understand - there are 6 secondary sources, all from real national newspapers here in Australia, cited properly, which verify the content of the article.

Please elaborate on why you think the article does not have sufficent citations.

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• Hey there Warbler21! So sorry for not specifying. Anyways, I would like to know more about the smh website because I'm not familiar with Australian websites. Anyways, nice to meet ya! Cheers! ---VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 09:15, 19 November 2016 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2016-11-19T09:15:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2016-11-19T09:15:00.000Z-Warbler21-2016-11-18T22:48:00.000Z","replies":["c-Warbler21-2017-03-05T09:43:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2016-11-19T09:15:00.000Z"],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

• • copy that. SMH is a newspaper that also runs a website. VKZY^{LUFan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Warbler21 (talk • contribs) 09:43, 5 March 2017 (UTC)}__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2017-03-05T09:43:00.000Z","author":"Warbler21","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Warbler21-2017-03-05T09:43:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2016-11-19T09:15:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

I have removed content you added to the above article, as it appears to have been copied from http://www.railway-technical.com/sigtxt3.shtml, a copyright web page. All content you add to Wikipedia must be written in your own words. Please let me know if you have any questions or if you think I made a mistake. — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 20:49, 27 November 2016 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2016-11-27T20:49:00.000Z","author":"Diannaa","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Diannaa-2016-11-27T20:49:00.000Z-Moving_block_copyright_problem","replies":["c-Vincent60030-2016-11-28T06:20:00.000Z-Diannaa-2016-11-27T20:49:00.000Z"]}}-->

• Hey there! It might seem as it is copied but I do not know how to rephrase the sentences. Could you please kindly assist me? Thanks VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 06:20, 28 November 2016 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2016-11-28T06:20:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2016-11-28T06:20:00.000Z-Diannaa-2016-11-27T20:49:00.000Z","replies":["c-Diannaa-2016-11-28T14:25:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2016-11-28T06:20:00.000Z"],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

It's a skill you are going to have to learn if you wish to contribute to this encyclopedia. One thing I find that works for me is to read over the source material and then pretend I am verbally describing the topic to a friend in my own words. Stuff should also be presented in a different order where possible. Summarize rather than paraphrase. This will typically result in your version being much shorter than the source document. There's some reading material on this topic at Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing and/or have a look at the material at Purdue. Please feel free to ask me via email if you are stuck and are not sure how to effectively re-word a passage.

Here is some prose to get you started. "Communications Based Train Control (CBTC) or Transmission Based Signalling (TBS) is used to monitor each train's the speed, braking capability, and location. This information is used to calculate a safe zone for each train, allowing for more efficient use of the system and maximizing capacity." — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 14:25, 28 November 2016 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2016-11-28T14:25:00.000Z","author":"Diannaa","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Diannaa-2016-11-28T14:25:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2016-11-28T06:20:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

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VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 10:20, 13 January 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-01-13T10:20:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2018-01-13T10:20:00.000Z-Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation:_McCallum_Bagpipes_Ltd_has_been_accepte","replies":["c-Rey_grschel-2018-01-13T22:48:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2018-01-13T10:20:00.000Z"],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

I'm the one who submitted the request for creation, so why is this comment appearing here? Is it because of the edit he made?Rey grschel (talk) 22:48, 13 January 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-01-13T22:48:00.000Z","author":"Rey grschel","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Rey_grschel-2018-01-13T22:48:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2018-01-13T10:20:00.000Z","replies":["c-Vincent60030-2018-01-14T05:42:00.000Z-Rey_grschel-2018-01-13T22:48:00.000Z"]}}-->

@Rey grschel: Idk either but I'm very sorry that this happened. I don't know whether it was a bug from the bot that I was using. VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 05:42, 14 January 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-01-14T05:42:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2018-01-14T05:42:00.000Z-Rey_grschel-2018-01-13T22:48:00.000Z","replies":["c-Rey_grschel-2018-01-14T05:49:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2018-01-14T05:42:00.000Z"],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

It's alright, I realized in the grand scheme of things that it doesn't really matter haha. {{u|Rey_grschel}} {Talk} 05:49, 14 January 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-01-14T05:49:00.000Z","author":"Rey grschel","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Rey_grschel-2018-01-14T05:49:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2018-01-14T05:42:00.000Z","replies":[],"displayName":"Rey_grschel"}}-->

Thanks for reviewing Bilal Ekşi, Vincent60030.

Unfortunately Primefac has just gone over this page again and unreviewed it. Their note is:

The copyvio was taken care of, so it probably needs re-reviewing.

To reply, leave a comment on Primefac's talk page.

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@Primefac: Thanks, kindly. VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 12:11, 3 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-03T12:11:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2018-02-03T12:11:00.000Z-Primefac-2018-02-02T15:55:00.000Z","replies":[],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

I see you recently accepted a pending change to February 3. I looked for a source for this date of birth in the Amal Clooney article and it was unsupported by any source there either.

You're probably not aware of this change, but Days of the Year pages are no longer exempt from WP:V and direct sources are required for additions. For details see the WikiProject Days of the Year style guide. I've gone ahead and un-accepted this edit and backed it out.

Please do not accept additions to day of year pages where no direct source has been provided on that page. The burden to provide sources for additions to these pages is on the editor who adds or restores material to these pages. Thank you. Toddst1 (talk) 16:27, 3 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-03T16:27:00.000Z","author":"Toddst1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Toddst1-2018-02-03T16:27:00.000Z-Sources_needed_for_Days_of_the_Year_pages","replies":["c-Vincent60030-2018-02-04T00:36:00.000Z-Toddst1-2018-02-03T16:27:00.000Z"]}}-->

@Toddst1: Thanks for letting me know. I've overlooked it. Yeah, it is better that way.VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 00:36, 4 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-04T00:36:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2018-02-04T00:36:00.000Z-Toddst1-2018-02-03T16:27:00.000Z","replies":[],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

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[[User:Vincent60030|<font color="orange">VKZY</font>]]<sup>[[User:Vincent60030/London Underground|<font color="red">LUFan</font>]]</sup> ([[User talk:Vincent60030|talk]]) <small>([[Special:Contributions/Vincent60030|Mind the Gap!]])</small> : VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!)

to

[[User:Vincent60030|<span style="color: orange">VKZY</span>]]<sup>[[User:Vincent60030/London Underground|<span style="color: red">LUFan</span>]]</sup> ([[User talk:Vincent60030|talk]]) <small>([[Special:Contributions/Vincent60030|Mind the Gap!]])</small> : VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!)

—Anomalocaris (talk) 11:07, 6 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-06T11:07:00.000Z","author":"Anomalocaris","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T11:07:00.000Z-Your_signature","replies":["c-Vincent60030-2018-02-06T11:09:00.000Z-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T11:07:00.000Z"]}}-->

Thanks for informing :) VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 11:09, 6 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-06T11:09:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2018-02-06T11:09:00.000Z-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T11:07:00.000Z","replies":["c-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T20:27:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2018-02-06T11:09:00.000Z"],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

Thanks for updating! —Anomalocaris (talk) 20:27, 6 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-06T20:27:00.000Z","author":"Anomalocaris","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T20:27:00.000Z-Vincent60030-2018-02-06T11:09:00.000Z","replies":["c-Redrose64-2018-02-06T21:37:00.000Z-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T20:27:00.000Z"]}}-->

It's now

[[User:Vincent60030|<span style="color: orange">VKZY</span>]]<sup>[[User:Vincent60030/London Underground|<span style="color: red">LUFan</span>]]</sup> ([[User talk:Vincent60030|talk]]) <small>([[Special:Contributions/Vincent60030|Mind the Gap!]])</small>

but could be shorter:

[[User:Vincent60030|<span style="color:orange">VKZY</span>]][[User:Vincent60030/London Underground|<sup style="color:red">LUFan</sup>]] ([[User talk:Vincent60030|talk]]) <small>([[Special:Contributions/Vincent60030|Mind the Gap!]])</small>

Please note that the orange text fails WP:CONTRAST, since its contrast ratio, even against a white background (which cannot always be relied upon on talk pages) is only 1.974:1 which is well short of the WCAG AA requirement, 4.5:1. To get up to this kind of contrast level and retain the same hue, you need to darken the text all the way down to color:#A46A00 which is a brown, like this, having a contrast ratio of 4.525:1. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 21:37, 6 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-06T21:37:00.000Z","author":"Redrose64","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Redrose64-2018-02-06T21:37:00.000Z-Anomalocaris-2018-02-06T20:27:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

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Plenumigo Thanks so much for your feedback on my page, Vincent! It's very helpful and I made the adjustments based on your recommendations, let me know what you think and if the page is ready for review. Thanks so much for your assistance! Plenumigo (talk) 00:02, 9 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-09T00:02:00.000Z","author":"Plenumigo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Plenumigo-2018-02-09T00:02:00.000Z-Scott_duPont","replies":[]}}-->

@Plenumigo: You're most welcome :) I have noticed that your draft needs a bit of a cleanup. I'm not that well at reviewing AfC, (disclaimer) but I'll try to help as much as I can. There is sufficient content to condense the paragraphed part, which means all of the contents can be splitted into sections (known as the body). A lead could be formed from this. Try writing short descriptions of his filmography and TV series. For bibliography, try adding inline citations for them. I'm pretty sure after these changes, the article will be accepted swiftly. :) Goodluck! VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 04:06, 11 February 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-02-11T04:06:00.000Z","author":"Vincent60030","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Vincent60030-2018-02-11T04:06:00.000Z-Scott_duPont","replies":[],"displayName":"VKZY"}}-->

@Vincent60030: Thanks so much for your inputs! I made the changes and will be waiting for the review! It's a pleasure collaborating with you, @Vincent60030:!

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