User talk:Twinkle1990/Archive 11

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Draft:P Nation

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Why did you reject the draft it has 29 references? The sources are in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent of the subject. I believe that it is not the right reason to reject the draft. If you have a better reason to reject it please give it in your explanation and not use the current reason. Lightoil (talk) 07:04, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222070400","author":"Lightoil","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lightoil-20230222070400-Draft:P_Nation","replies":["c-Twinkle1990-20230222071400-Lightoil-20230222070400"]}}-->

Most references are in Korean language, the discography section is un-sourced, ref 4 is not live, ref 5 and ref 25 are same, ref 11 doesn't even speak about the subject. And how many reason should I provide? I have checked all the references before declining. Numbers don't matter, we need just a few reliable and in-depth. You are an experienced editor. If you believe my decline is wrong, you are welcome to undo mine and accept the draft. Twinkle1990 (talk) 07:14, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222071400","author":"Twinkle1990","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Twinkle1990-20230222071400-Lightoil-20230222070400","replies":["c-Lightoil-20230222072900-Twinkle1990-20230222071400"]}}-->
I am not an AFC participant so I cannot accept the draft. Having references in Korean is acceptable in English Wikipedia per WP:NOENG. The discography section is unusually unsourced look at Jellyfish Entertainment discography. The sources are mostly reliable and in-depth see WP:KO/RS. Lightoil (talk) 07:29, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222072900","author":"Lightoil","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Lightoil-20230222072900-Twinkle1990-20230222071400","replies":["c-Twinkle1990-20230222073800-Lightoil-20230222072900"]}}-->
The same WP:NOENG says "English-language sources are preferred over non-English ones when they're available and of equal quality and relevance", so I chose this as the English language sources are not sufficient to support the notability of the N:CORP. You may not be the AFC reviewer, but as a WP:RCP you can undo my action there. I would happily accept your decision with good faith. Twinkle1990 (talk) 07:38, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222073800","author":"Twinkle1990","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Twinkle1990-20230222073800-Lightoil-20230222072900","replies":["c-Lightoil-20230222075100-Twinkle1990-20230222073800"]}}-->
However, in this case they are not available as they are a Korean company. Being a recent changes patroller does not give me the right to undo your rejection of the submission. It just means that I sometimes patrol recent changes to revert vandalism. Lightoil (talk) 07:51, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222075100","author":"Lightoil","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Lightoil-20230222075100-Twinkle1990-20230222073800","replies":["c-Twinkle1990-20230222075500-Lightoil-20230222075100"]}}-->
Can you please check the reference list? I guess you understand Korean. Please check you give me 5 refs that supports notability. I will undo my review. Twinkle1990 (talk) 07:55, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222075500","author":"Twinkle1990","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Twinkle1990-20230222075500-Lightoil-20230222075100","replies":["c-Lightoil-20230222080200-Twinkle1990-20230222075500"]}}-->
I don't understand Korean but google translate should give you a good enough idea whether the sources support notability. Lightoil (talk) 08:02, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222080200","author":"Lightoil","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Lightoil-20230222080200-Twinkle1990-20230222075500","replies":["c-S0091-20230222143900-Lightoil-20230222080200"]}}-->
@Lightoil you can resubmit the draft and another reviewer will take a look. The original submitted is blocked so is unable to do so. Twinkle1990, if you cannot assess non-English sources in instances where there are many then it is probably best to skip reviewing a draft. You may find the Google Translate browser extension helpful. That's what I use. S0091 (talk) 14:39, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222143900","author":"S0091","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-S0091-20230222143900-Lightoil-20230222080200","replies":["c-Lightoil-20230222145500-S0091-20230222143900","c-Twinkle1990-20230223031600-S0091-20230222143900"]}}-->
@S0091 thank you for your advise I will resubmit. Lightoil (talk) 14:55, 22 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230222145500","author":"Lightoil","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Lightoil-20230222145500-S0091-20230222143900","replies":[]}}-->
@S0091 Thank you. I will skip. Twinkle1990 (talk) 03:16, 23 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230223031600","author":"Twinkle1990","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Twinkle1990-20230223031600-S0091-20230222143900","replies":[]}}-->
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Draft:Stefan Mihajlov

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Hello, This draft has been declined several times, but you are the one who declined it just a few hours ago. I have edited and improved the draft, but I would like to seek your opinion on it before resubmitting it again.


Looking forward to a response from you, Thanks. Khaddy4 (talk) 03:17, 23 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230223031700","author":"Khaddy4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Khaddy4-20230223031700-Draft:Stefan_Mihajlov","replies":["c-Twinkle1990-20230223032500-Khaddy4-20230223031700"]}}-->

Add some News sources to support the claims. Ref 2 is an interview, so that won't help. Twinkle1990 (talk) 03:25, 23 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230223032500","author":"Twinkle1990","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Twinkle1990-20230223032500-Khaddy4-20230223031700","replies":["c-Khaddy4-20230223061200-Twinkle1990-20230223032500"]}}-->
Okay thank you Khaddy4 (talk) 06:12, 23 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230223061200","author":"Khaddy4","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Khaddy4-20230223061200-Twinkle1990-20230223032500","replies":[]}}-->
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Draft:Anzor Alem

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Hi Twinkle1990, This draft has been declined several times, you were declined just a few hours ago. I have edited and improved the draft, but would like your feedback on it before re-submitting it thank you. Congopro (talk) 07:16, 25 February 2023 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20230225071600","author":"Congopro","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Congopro-20230225071600-Draft:Anzor_Alem","replies":[]}}-->