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Hello! Your submission of State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Onceinawhile (talk) 21:53, 1 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-01T21:53:00.000Z","author":"Onceinawhile","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Onceinawhile-2018-05-01T21:53:00.000Z-DYK_nomination_of_State_communications_in_the_Neo-Assyrian_Empire","replies":[]}}-->

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Thanks for noting my error, accepting the correction and promoting the article. I appreciate your modification of the hook, as well. I think it is another good catch not to leave a possible implication that dates that Clitz was commandant of cadets included the date of his "disappearance" and almost certain suicide - or perhaps carelessness due to his mental condition. I am leaving my note here rather than in the template because that has already been closed for discussion. Donner60 (talk) 08:52, 9 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-09T08:52:00.000Z","author":"Donner60","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donner60-2018-05-09T08:52:00.000Z-Did_you_know:_Henry_Boynton_Clitz","replies":[]}}-->

Hi, why did you promote this nomination when it wasn't yet approved? I was waiting for the page creator to complete work on the second article so we could have a double hook. I returned the template to WP:DYKNA. Yoninah (talk) 13:23, 9 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-09T13:23:00.000Z","author":"Yoninah","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yoninah-2018-05-09T13:23:00.000Z-Template:Did_you_know_nominations\/Iveta_Mukuchyan","replies":["c-HaEr48-2018-05-09T16:35:00.000Z-Yoninah-2018-05-09T13:23:00.000Z"]}}-->

@Yoninah: Sorry about that. My understanding was the nomination (with a single bolded article) was approved by Courcelles [1] , and the double hook idea was just a nice-to-have. Given that a week passed from the creation of Swallow Music Awards without an effort to nominate that for a hook, I assumed the nominator wasn't going to do that. Anyway, I thought the state of Swallow Music Awards was not a reason to hold up the original approved hook. I understand if you disagree with this thinking, and won't dispute your revert of my promotion. I will be more careful next time. Also if you don't think it's ready for promotion, can you remove it from WP:DYKNA? I thought the reason for DYKNA as opposed to WP:DYKN was to separate hooks that are ready. HaEr48 (talk) 16:35, 9 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-09T16:35:00.000Z","author":"HaEr48","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-HaEr48-2018-05-09T16:35:00.000Z-Yoninah-2018-05-09T13:23:00.000Z","replies":["c-Yoninah-2018-05-09T17:30:00.000Z-HaEr48-2018-05-09T16:35:00.000Z"]}}-->

Thanks for your response. I will be in touch with the page creator to see if he's going to bring Swallow Music Awards up to start-class or not. Actually, it's the bot that moves approved hooks to WP:DYKNA. But when someone adds a question mark, the bot doesn't move it back to WP:DYKN. Only when a new reviewer is needed do I manually move a nomination back to WP:DYKN so more eyes will see it. Otherwise, things just sit on the Approved page until they're really approved. Best, Yoninah (talk) 17:30, 9 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-09T17:30:00.000Z","author":"Yoninah","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yoninah-2018-05-09T17:30:00.000Z-HaEr48-2018-05-09T16:35:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

On 10 May 2018, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that the state communication system developed in the Neo-Assyrian Empire enabled communication speed unsurpassed in the Middle East until the advent of telegraphy? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

Gatoclass (talk) 12:02, 10 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-10T12:02:00.000Z","author":"Gatoclass","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Gatoclass-2018-05-10T12:02:00.000Z-DYK_for_State_communications_in_the_Neo-Assyrian_Empire","replies":[]}}-->

Hello! Your submission of Unity of the intellect at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Andrew D. (talk) 18:35, 10 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-10T18:35:00.000Z","author":"Andrew Davidson","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Andrew_Davidson-2018-05-10T18:35:00.000Z-DYK_nomination_of_Unity_of_the_intellect","replies":[],"displayName":"Andrew D."}}-->

Just explaining: the original wording in the Assyrian Communications article just said that nothing faster than the mule messenger system existed until telegraphy, without mentioning the Middle East. That's not correct, since the French had semaphore a century earlier. As currently written it is accurate. IAmNitpicking (talk) 14:16, 11 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-11T14:16:00.000Z","author":"IAmNitpicking","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-IAmNitpicking-2018-05-11T14:16:00.000Z-Semaphore","replies":["c-HaEr48-2018-05-11T17:12:00.000Z-IAmNitpicking-2018-05-11T14:16:00.000Z"]}}-->

@IAmNitpicking: Right, thanks for pointing that out. HaEr48 (talk) 17:12, 11 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-11T17:12:00.000Z","author":"HaEr48","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-HaEr48-2018-05-11T17:12:00.000Z-IAmNitpicking-2018-05-11T14:16:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

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Hello! Your submission of Resettlement policy of the Neo-Assyrian Empire at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Hawkeye7 (discuss) 23:17, 12 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-12T23:17:00.000Z","author":"Hawkeye7","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hawkeye7-2018-05-12T23:17:00.000Z-DYK_nomination_of_Resettlement_policy_of_the_Neo-Assyrian_Empire","replies":[]}}-->

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of QatarStarsLeague -- QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:01, 14 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-14T21:01:00.000Z","author":"QatarStarsLeague","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-QatarStarsLeague-2018-05-14T21:01:00.000Z-Your_GA_nomination_of_State_communications_in_the_Neo-Assyrian_Empire","replies":[]}}-->

On 21 May 2018, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Conquest of Murcia (1265–66), which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that James I of Aragon undertook the conquest of Murcia after a request for assistance from his daughter? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Conquest of Murcia (1265–66). You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Conquest of Murcia (1265–66)), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

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The article State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:State communications in the Neo-Assyrian Empire for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of QatarStarsLeague -- QatarStarsLeague (talk) 22:41, 21 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-21T22:41:00.000Z","author":"QatarStarsLeague","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-QatarStarsLeague-2018-05-21T22:41:00.000Z-Your_GA_nomination_of_State_communications_in_the_Neo-Assyrian_Empire_2","replies":[]}}-->

On 23 May 2018, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Resettlement policy of the Neo-Assyrian Empire, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that the Assyrian captivity of the Israelites was one instance of forced resettlements carried out by the Neo-Assyrian Empire? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Resettlement policy of the Neo-Assyrian Empire. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Resettlement policy of the Neo-Assyrian Empire), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

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HaEr48, I was hoping you could stop by the review page and say whether you thought the issues you raised had been adequately addressed or not. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:16, 22 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-22T02:16:00.000Z","author":"BlueMoonset","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-BlueMoonset-2018-05-22T02:16:00.000Z-Template:Did_you_know_nominations\/Sayyidat_Nisa_al-Alamin","replies":["c-HaEr48-2018-05-23T04:41:00.000Z-BlueMoonset-2018-05-22T02:16:00.000Z"]}}-->

@BlueMoonset: I replied there. Hope that helps. HaEr48 (talk) 04:41, 23 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-23T04:41:00.000Z","author":"HaEr48","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-HaEr48-2018-05-23T04:41:00.000Z-BlueMoonset-2018-05-22T02:16:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

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Hello, HaEr48. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for Averroes at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Cheers, Baffle gab1978 01:38, 26 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-26T01:38:00.000Z","author":"Baffle gab1978","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-26T01:38:00.000Z-Averroes","replies":[]}}-->

@Baffle gab1978: Hold on, didn't HLHJ already copyedit it? But wouldn't mind if you'd still like to improve it :) HaEr48 (talk) 00:35, 24 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-24T00:35:00.000Z","author":"HaEr48","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HaEr48-2018-05-24T00:35:00.000Z-Averroes","replies":["c-HLHJ-2018-05-24T02:41:00.000Z-HaEr48-2018-05-24T00:35:00.000Z","c-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-24T03:10:00.000Z-HaEr48-2018-05-24T00:35:00.000Z"]}}-->

Nor would I mind, I'm not an experienced copyeditor :) HLHJ (talk) 02:41, 24 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-24T02:41:00.000Z","author":"HLHJ","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-HLHJ-2018-05-24T02:41:00.000Z-HaEr48-2018-05-24T00:35:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

It's still on the requests page and hasn't been marked with {{working}}, {{partly done}} or {{done}}, so I was unaware of HLHJ's intent. I should have checked his single edit here... d'oh! ;) But I think it does need more work and i found some more typos... I'll happily credit you as co-copy-editor in the archives HLHJ; thanks for your work on the article. Cheers, Baffle gab1978 03:10, 24 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-24T03:10:00.000Z","author":"Baffle gab1978","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-24T03:10:00.000Z-HaEr48-2018-05-24T00:35:00.000Z","replies":["c-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-26T01:38:00.000Z-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-24T03:10:00.000Z"]}}-->

 Done; Cheers, Baffle gab1978 01:38, 26 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-26T01:38:00.000Z","author":"Baffle gab1978","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-26T01:38:00.000Z-Baffle_gab1978-2018-05-24T03:10:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->

Thanks a lot, ‎Baffle gab1978 and HLHJ! HaEr48 (talk) 02:18, 26 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-26T02:18:00.000Z","author":"HaEr48","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HaEr48-2018-05-26T02:18:00.000Z-Averroes","replies":[]}}-->

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The article Indonesia at the 1952 Summer Olympics you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Indonesia at the 1952 Summer Olympics for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Courcelles -- Courcelles (talk) 01:06, 28 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-28T01:06:00.000Z","author":"Courcelles","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Courcelles-2018-05-28T01:06:00.000Z-Your_GA_nomination_of_Indonesia_at_the_1952_Summer_Olympics_2","replies":[]}}-->

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If you are looking for a DYK to review, I have one that has been waiting for more than 2 weeks. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Patnagarh_bombing Thank you for considering a review, even if you decide not to do it. Vanguard10 (talk) 21:31, 28 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-28T21:31:00.000Z","author":"Vanguard10","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Vanguard10-2018-05-28T21:31:00.000Z-DYK","replies":["c-Vanguard10-2018-05-29T03:11:00.000Z-Vanguard10-2018-05-28T21:31:00.000Z"]}}-->

Thank you for your comments. I have made corrections because of your comments. Would you kindly review the DYK nomination?

I have reviewed the DYK of Maram Sudarmodjo, Indonesia at the 1952 Summer Olympics. Good work. I recommended selecting the original hook instead of ALT1. Vanguard10 (talk) 03:11, 29 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-29T03:11:00.000Z","author":"Vanguard10","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Vanguard10-2018-05-29T03:11:00.000Z-Vanguard10-2018-05-28T21:31:00.000Z","replies":["c-Vanguard10-2018-05-30T05:06:00.000Z-Vanguard10-2018-05-29T03:11:00.000Z"]}}-->

Would you kindly take another look at the DYK nomination because I edited the article. Vanguard10 (talk) 05:06, 30 May 2018 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"2018-05-30T05:06:00.000Z","author":"Vanguard10","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Vanguard10-2018-05-30T05:06:00.000Z-Vanguard10-2018-05-29T03:11:00.000Z","replies":[]}}-->